This is a letter of a present I have wanted for many years but I don’t have the money to get it. It is a dog that I look at in my dog books. It is a bulldog that I want to name Georgia and these type of dogs cost too much money. Sometimes I feel like I don’t deserve this present, because my mom says that and I feel that she is right. I also feel sad for not appreciating the things I get and also not listening to my parents. But now I want to start over and listen to my parents and be a good kid. I also want to appreciate the things that my parents get for me. So if you can get this for me, even if I’m not the parent, I would still be happy because it would be a very surprising present.
Iaisha Manning
Great Job! This is a great letter to Santa but I thought you could expand a bit more like maybe why you want a bulldog or how it would be good for others that live with you and how it would be great for even you. Overall, I thougt you did a great job!
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